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Forgiveness Begins...

In the realm of one's own heart

2 total reviews 
Comment from Barry Penfold
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

A lovely poem. It really does search out the ways to forgiveness and if forgiveness is not forthcoming, at least finding peace in the shadows. Well done and all the best for the competition. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Barry,

    Thank you for your 6 star review. I appreciate and value your encouraging comments.

    All the best,

    BB50
Comment from lancellot
Excellent
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These feel and sound like strong words of wisdom and perhaps a lesson from one's personal experience. I think this free verse will touch many of the older members on the site, who may have regrets over such things.

A solid entry. Good luck.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
    Lancelot,

    Thank you for your excellent review. This poem is indeed one that draws from my personal experience. My wife and I divorced in 2008 after 17 years together and was the one that hoped for reconcillion.

    All other best,

    BB50