Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

So this is intense, that's a hallmark of passion! Always the grammar nerd, I was pleased to see you appropriately used the subjunctive mood for this hypothetical situation. :-)
I don't think it will do well in contest because people seem to prefer boring drivel, but it gets my vote. None of the others particular struck me as passion.
Julie
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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024

Thank you for the fantastic review, Julie. Yeah, that boring crap always seems to pass on here. I just like throwing ridiculous crap in there sometimes just to mess with them. Lol. I really appreciate the stars and support. I was beginning to think I wasn't even going to get my second review. Ha. Have yourself a great December and thanks again.

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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

This is an awesome poem and I can see how you connect poetry to sex, especially it you are passionate about it.


Well done and good luck in the contest

Cecilia

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024

Thank you for the great review, Cecilia. I was just goofing around with the prompt. I really appreciate the stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silliness.

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 30-Nov-2024

Well your goofing around worked out for you. Some might get offended by your poem, but that's on them.

Cecilia

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024

Yep, that's how I see it. Lol