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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a wonderful forgiveness poem. It flow nicely to completion and rhymes throughout. The picture you chose is spot on.
Well done and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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This is a wonderful forgiveness poem. It flow nicely to completion and rhymes throughout. The picture you chose is spot on.
Well done and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Cecilia. I appreciate your kind review and good luck wish.
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from RodG
Your poem does a lovely job of reminding us of Jesus on the cross praying for OUR forgiveness just before He died. Your poem tells us we can always seek forgiveness in Him. Only one rhyme you might work on: child and while in stanza 4.
Rod
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Your poem does a lovely job of reminding us of Jesus on the cross praying for OUR forgiveness just before He died. Your poem tells us we can always seek forgiveness in Him. Only one rhyme you might work on: child and while in stanza 4.
Rod
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Rod. I appreciate your insightful review and constructive suggestion.