2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 112 "Waves Rise Waves Fall".
9 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
This is definitely an intriguing read, I suppose the waves, tide, and the water, just are, an excellent read and I really like this form, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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This is definitely an intriguing read, I suppose the waves, tide, and the water, just are, an excellent read and I really like this form, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Mark Schardine
Truly an excellent example of meditative poetry, one that stays with us, and causes to think again and again about water, which gives us life, can give us death, and remains essential to all things.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Truly an excellent example of meditative poetry, one that stays with us, and causes to think again and again about water, which gives us life, can give us death, and remains essential to all things.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That picture of the wave is hypnotic, Gypsy! I love this two syllables a line poem, it flows as gently as the wave above it. The sea is a relazing place to be beside. I can sit there and daydream for hours. Your words meet the wave superbly, my friend. Very well done! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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That picture of the wave is hypnotic, Gypsy! I love this two syllables a line poem, it flows as gently as the wave above it. The sea is a relazing place to be beside. I can sit there and daydream for hours. Your words meet the wave superbly, my friend. Very well done! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Hmm. I have to think about that one. Waves do move ceaselessly. That it doesn't have birth or life is probably dependent on one's observation. One could also view it as constant birth and death. And there's so much life in the ocean. I love the sea water!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Hmm. I have to think about that one. Waves do move ceaselessly. That it doesn't have birth or life is probably dependent on one's observation. One could also view it as constant birth and death. And there's so much life in the ocean. I love the sea water!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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The waves and water is a zen concept that there's no birth and death, life continues in deferent forms. The ocean and waves is a personification fir teaching purpose. Another example is the sea becomes a cloud, a cloud becomes the rain, the Rane becomes rivers and ocean..... and continues. I'm not a Buddhist but I find their religion and points of view interesting. I watch a lot of Thich Nhat Hanh videos. He is wise and funny. He died in 2022, close to 100 years old.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from Neonewman
This is an exciting and challenging style. Looks like you navigated through this with ease. I've always found the waves at the beach peaceful. Thank you for sharing this inspiring piece, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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This is an exciting and challenging style. Looks like you navigated through this with ease. I've always found the waves at the beach peaceful. Thank you for sharing this inspiring piece, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy Thanksgiving 😊
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My pleasure, and Happy Thanksgiving as well, Young Lady.
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful words inspired by Thìch Nhat Hanh, short and sweet. I think I mentioned that my niece is Buddhist. Sometimes, she sends me quotes from his writings. Thank you for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Beautiful words inspired by Thìch Nhat Hanh, short and sweet. I think I mentioned that my niece is Buddhist. Sometimes, she sends me quotes from his writings. Thank you for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Yes, you did tell me that. I love Thach Nhat Hanh. I like to listen to his lessons.
Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
never stoping -- typo- "stopping"
other than that a great 2-syllable line free verse with cool imagery rising and falling down the page. . .
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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never stoping -- typo- "stopping"
other than that a great 2-syllable line free verse with cool imagery rising and falling down the page. . .
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Wow, that visual is amazing! It's equally amazing that, as you say, the sea has this omnipotent, everlasting force Thank you for sharing this powerful message in such a succinct and effective verse. A small edit 'stop(p)ing' Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Wow, that visual is amazing! It's equally amazing that, as you say, the sea has this omnipotent, everlasting force Thank you for sharing this powerful message in such a succinct and effective verse. A small edit 'stop(p)ing' Take care Debbie
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from zanya
Yes what an interesting insight into the subject of 'water' here in this poem and powerful imagery to portray it - Thich Nhat Hanh was inspirational in life
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Yes what an interesting insight into the subject of 'water' here in this poem and powerful imagery to portray it - Thich Nhat Hanh was inspirational in life
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊