Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Patty, This is a very cute, well worded rhyming poem for the contest. You used great descriptive rhyming words and very cute imagery from the artwork you chose to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2024

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This story poem is very well written and I very much enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best in the contest and may you have a lovely week and may you have a terrific Thanksgiving. Patricia.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2024

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

Patty,

This is a wonderful little poem you created. I love the way it rhymes throughout. You have created a nice story poem. It flows to from beginning to end telling the story completely.

Well done and good luck in your contest

Cecilia

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I enjoyed this inventive post about the secret ingredient of nutmeg, a great spice adding a touch of seasonal surprise. Much enjoyed.

Suggestion for these lines:

A flavor so rare, no one else could (deride).

And baked the cake worthy to (judge and to dream).

Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2024