Infidelity
and its tragic consequences2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
The intensity in this poem is amazing! I felt the panic of being trapped. The wife's face, split into two different smiles, was chilling! So unsettling! Your word choices were excellent and I could picture this all in my head. You've done a fantastic job creating a haunting atmosphere!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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The intensity in this poem is amazing! I felt the panic of being trapped. The wife's face, split into two different smiles, was chilling! So unsettling! Your word choices were excellent and I could picture this all in my head. You've done a fantastic job creating a haunting atmosphere!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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So kind, Michael. Thanks.
Comment from royowen
I think this is a very good entry in this contest, revealing what it may be like to be in the mind of someone who has cracked under the strain of infidelity,I cam imagine, excellent job, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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I think this is a very good entry in this contest, revealing what it may be like to be in the mind of someone who has cracked under the strain of infidelity,I cam imagine, excellent job, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Roy.
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Welcome