A part of you
Let me in, I'll be...4 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem about the evil devil and his ill will toward man. You used great descriptive words that fit him and what he is all about perfectly. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
God wins - satan loses!!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
This is a very well written poem about the evil devil and his ill will toward man. You used great descriptive words that fit him and what he is all about perfectly. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
God wins - satan loses!!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thanks for your insightful comments, l really appreciate it.
Comment from Sally Law
Well, I felt this one and know the power of hate. It is black and infectious as you said, and wants company. A strong contender in the Personification of an Emotion poetry contest.
Sending you my best today as always and my best wishes in the vote.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
Well, I felt this one and know the power of hate. It is black and infectious as you said, and wants company. A strong contender in the Personification of an Emotion poetry contest.
Sending you my best today as always and my best wishes in the vote.
Sally :))
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you, your reviews mean a lot to me. :)
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great personification of an emotion. You did a great job throughout and the rhyming is spot on.
Well done and good luck in your contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
This is a great personification of an emotion. You did a great job throughout and the rhyming is spot on.
Well done and good luck in your contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much, it's very appreciated. :)
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from AprilViolet
Wow! What a powerful piece on such a strong emotion. Hopefully where there is hate, love is not far behind. We have far too much of that already in the world.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
Wow! What a powerful piece on such a strong emotion. Hopefully where there is hate, love is not far behind. We have far too much of that already in the world.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for this great review!