2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 109 "Point Reyes Beach".
6 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Sounds like a lovely spot, it is startling when relaxing to be disturbed by someone else's fun, though again probably a very nice spot for some music as well, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Sounds like a lovely spot, it is startling when relaxing to be disturbed by someone else's fun, though again probably a very nice spot for some music as well, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. As I read, I felt like I was on Point Reyes beach seeing and hearing the activity. That's good writing. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. As I read, I felt like I was on Point Reyes beach seeing and hearing the activity. That's good writing. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Really liked this one, it is so clear in verse and vivid color. I think you might have a winner here. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're having a great weekend so far,
RJ
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Really liked this one, it is so clear in verse and vivid color. I think you might have a winner here. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're having a great weekend so far,
RJ
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ. I appreciate your exceptional six star review.
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
I asked my husband if he's been there and yes, he has been there. But you know Americans pronounce it as Point Rays, but like you I pronounce Reyes as two syllables. You might want to note that syllable count. Great way to capture the sights and sounds and sensations of the beach. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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I asked my husband if he's been there and yes, he has been there. But you know Americans pronounce it as Point Rays, but like you I pronounce Reyes as two syllables. You might want to note that syllable count. Great way to capture the sights and sounds and sensations of the beach. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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When I lived in northern California I went to Point Reyes national park and little town a lot. I love it. I had some fan times.
Thank you very much, big sister.
❤️ Marival
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is fun, Gypsy, and really makes me want to visit Point Reyes Beach. It's got it all: the sun, sand, band dance, song and laughter. The razzle-dazzle line is the clincher! All neatly wrapped up in your well-crafted nonet. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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This is fun, Gypsy, and really makes me want to visit Point Reyes Beach. It's got it all: the sun, sand, band dance, song and laughter. The razzle-dazzle line is the clincher! All neatly wrapped up in your well-crafted nonet. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
loved the lying calmly in all the colours of the first four lines - great imagery!
like the razzle dazzle of song and dance - good beat!
smooth flow throughout the lines
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest - it should do well!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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loved the lying calmly in all the colours of the first four lines - great imagery!
like the razzle dazzle of song and dance - good beat!
smooth flow throughout the lines
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest - it should do well!
shelley :)
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊