Screams of the Shadows
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Arrival"In the dark, the screams never stop.
2 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Good thing I m reading this in the daylight because your setting and eerie descriptions are sending chills down my spine with each moment. Of course, that was your intent. Good job! I'm sitting on the edge of my chair waiting.....
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Good thing I m reading this in the daylight because your setting and eerie descriptions are sending chills down my spine with each moment. Of course, that was your intent. Good job! I'm sitting on the edge of my chair waiting.....
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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some how I published them in the wrong order and then they wouldn't let me publish the one I missed because of that 2 in one day rule, now I have it straightened out
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed the way you built the suspense in your story! The dark setting made me feel like I was right there! The way you described the environment like the flickering light and the dripping water gave the whole place a creepy feel. The ending left me wanting more! Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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I really enjoyed the way you built the suspense in your story! The dark setting made me feel like I was right there! The way you described the environment like the flickering light and the dripping water gave the whole place a creepy feel. The ending left me wanting more! Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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some how I published them in the wrong order and then they wouldn't let me publish the one I missed because of that 2 in one day rule, now I have it straightened out