Screams of the Shadows
Viewing comments for Prologue "Screams of the Shadows"In the dark, the screams never stop.
2 total reviews
Comment from Rick Gardner
Looks real interesting, Need more, send more. Need much more to truly evaluate this story, I think you have already written more and will continue the character development and so just write on.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Looks real interesting, Need more, send more. Need much more to truly evaluate this story, I think you have already written more and will continue the character development and so just write on.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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thanks that was just 3 chapters i posted today but you're right I have the whole thing written, just don't want to overwhelm anyone
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Just waiting anxiously.
Comment from Begin Again
It was a terrific spot to begin and pull the reader straight into the story. You did an awesome job, Marilyn. I'm so happy to see you back. I hope you are feeling better. Have a great day! I can't wait to see the next chapter.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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It was a terrific spot to begin and pull the reader straight into the story. You did an awesome job, Marilyn. I'm so happy to see you back. I hope you are feeling better. Have a great day! I can't wait to see the next chapter.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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i have the whole thing written just don't want to overwhelm anyone by posting too much