Comment from karenina

Excellent

We're in such a fine mess,
I hope we are blessed...
Our country needs mending,
there's no use pretending!

Will he settle a score or open our door to promises bright? We'll see soon, alright!

Karenina

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024

Thank you for this amazing review..you're a great writer.

reply by karenina on 24-Nov-2024

Smile...

You too!

Comment from Terry Reilly

Excellent

Wow! As alternative reality raises its ugly head this is surrealist fantasy at its most pernicious. I try to respect the mindset that lives comfortably with this nonsense, but I cannot take that step into the twilight zone. RIP USA!

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024

Thanks for reading. I'm assuming that you gave 4 stars is because you don't like the way l wrote it..technically wrong? It can't be because of the content, right? Thanks again! :)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written Political 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt entry. You used very good descriptive and very true words .
Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024

Thanks so much for this great review. :)

reply by Teri7 on 24-Nov-2024

You are so welcome! I have to agree with you! Blessings, Teri

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

Totally agree. I voted for Biden but totally disappointed. He is not in charge. He has dementia. The Neocons are and all they do is to send billions to the war.

Well done.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024

I appreciate your great comments....thanks for reading. :)