Comment from
kiwisteveh
Ha, ha! I see more anti-Trump posts in this one contest than there were in the four pre-election years! Not that more opposition on FanStory would have made any difference to those folks who voted for this circus.
Good luck - in the country as well as the election.
Steve
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
Yes, too bad we have so many tunnel-visioned, selfish people in this country.
Comment from
Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-A good first line establishes the premise.
-Effective imagery and alliteration in line two,
along with the reference to the "center ring."
-A good concluding line that sums up the circus.
-A good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
Thanks so much for your read and the review. Yes, it is the font; I think I will change it.
reply by Pam (respa) on 23-Nov-2024
It looks a lot better. I removed the suggestion from your review.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
reply by Pam (respa) on 23-Nov-2024