Helen and Me
Young love2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this fantasy story of this little boy deep into his dreams. As reality dawns, the dream is at an end. I enjoyed the journey Peter, lovely rhymes and flow, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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I enjoyed this fantasy story of this little boy deep into his dreams. As reality dawns, the dream is at an end. I enjoyed the journey Peter, lovely rhymes and flow, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Hi, thanks for the review - glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from bob cullen
Delightful. Is this written to go with the tune of 'He Flew Through Through The Air With The Greatest Of Ease, The Daring Young Man On The Flying Trapeze?' To me, it flows with the same smooth flow. This is not meant as criticism. A very refreshing and enjoyable read to wake up too on a Tuesday morning.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Delightful. Is this written to go with the tune of 'He Flew Through Through The Air With The Greatest Of Ease, The Daring Young Man On The Flying Trapeze?' To me, it flows with the same smooth flow. This is not meant as criticism. A very refreshing and enjoyable read to wake up too on a Tuesday morning.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thanks for the review - glad you enjoyed it.
No tune intended - just flowed through the fingers :)