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Elmer Flew

A fanciful tale about a tree named Elmer

3 total reviews 
Comment from karenina
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I love Shel S.

His "The Giving Tree" was my children's favorite bedtime story.

All these decades later I read your poem to my ten hear old grandson, Maxwell, who gave it two giant thumbs up.

You can't do much better than that!

Karenina

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Thanks, Karenina. I'm very happy your grandson enjoyed my verse.
reply by karenina on 02-Dec-2024
    Me too!
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
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thanks for an adorable child's poem that would actually be suitable for schools and for use in a song ( i tried to imagine the music notes )
I hope you win the contest,
thanks a million,
Kind regards,
Sarah

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Many thanks, Sarah. I've thought of converting it to a song, as well.
reply by Sarah Probe S. on 02-Dec-2024
    great idea ❤️
Comment from Bill Schott
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This story poem, Elmer Flew, takes the readers on a journey through windy storm as a tree travels the path of a free leaf until he returns to terra firma. Neat adventure for a tree.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Thanks, Bill.