Elmer Flew
A fanciful tale about a tree named Elmer3 total reviews
Comment from karenina
I love Shel S.
His "The Giving Tree" was my children's favorite bedtime story.
All these decades later I read your poem to my ten hear old grandson, Maxwell, who gave it two giant thumbs up.
You can't do much better than that!
Karenina
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
I love Shel S.
His "The Giving Tree" was my children's favorite bedtime story.
All these decades later I read your poem to my ten hear old grandson, Maxwell, who gave it two giant thumbs up.
You can't do much better than that!
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Thanks, Karenina. I'm very happy your grandson enjoyed my verse.
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Me too!
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
thanks for an adorable child's poem that would actually be suitable for schools and for use in a song ( i tried to imagine the music notes )
I hope you win the contest,
thanks a million,
Kind regards,
Sarah
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
thanks for an adorable child's poem that would actually be suitable for schools and for use in a song ( i tried to imagine the music notes )
I hope you win the contest,
thanks a million,
Kind regards,
Sarah
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Many thanks, Sarah. I've thought of converting it to a song, as well.
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great idea ❤️
Comment from Bill Schott
This story poem, Elmer Flew, takes the readers on a journey through windy storm as a tree travels the path of a free leaf until he returns to terra firma. Neat adventure for a tree.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
This story poem, Elmer Flew, takes the readers on a journey through windy storm as a tree travels the path of a free leaf until he returns to terra firma. Neat adventure for a tree.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Thanks, Bill.