The lion and the calf
A poem11 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Okay, is that a REAL photo...? :-) That query notwithstanding, a wonderful offering for the world today, Sir Roy -- thanx for that! ;) Yvette
know life's pa --> know life's path
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Okay, is that a REAL photo...? :-) That query notwithstanding, a wonderful offering for the world today, Sir Roy -- thanx for that! ;) Yvette
know life's pa --> know life's path
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Roy,
You had me at hello at this poem: "The Lion and the Calf."
A poem using animals as a metaphor for God's guiding hand; we people being his progeny through Christ. So nicely done, Roy.
Thank you for the apt scriptures.
Have a nice Spring weekend.
It's cold here! lol
Blessings,
Cindy
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Roy,
You had me at hello at this poem: "The Lion and the Calf."
A poem using animals as a metaphor for God's guiding hand; we people being his progeny through Christ. So nicely done, Roy.
Thank you for the apt scriptures.
Have a nice Spring weekend.
It's cold here! lol
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have that confidence in God too. He can do whatever He feels is necessary. We all need to have that faith. Thank you for sharing this God inspired poem with us.
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I have that confidence in God too. He can do whatever He feels is necessary. We all need to have that faith. Thank you for sharing this God inspired poem with us.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Roy,
Another great poem. I think God speaks through your poetry. There is always a lesson to be had. How do you come up with all these great poems?
I struggle when I try to write them. I'm working on another Kratos poem, but I can't seem to get my rhyme right. Any suggestions?
Cecilia
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Roy,
Another great poem. I think God speaks through your poetry. There is always a lesson to be had. How do you come up with all these great poems?
I struggle when I try to write them. I'm working on another Kratos poem, but I can't seem to get my rhyme right. Any suggestions?
Cecilia
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks Cecilia, for these lovely comments and review, blessings Roy
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from RJ Heritage
The lion and the calf speak
of a time to come that is peaceful under the government of Jesus Christ; this requires faith to believe
Nicely written poem that reminds me of where, and in whom my faith should lie.
RJ
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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The lion and the calf speak
of a time to come that is peaceful under the government of Jesus Christ; this requires faith to believe
Nicely written poem that reminds me of where, and in whom my faith should lie.
RJ
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks RJ, for these magnificent comments and a fine review, blessings Roy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Wendy G
Very nice, Roy. I do believe it is important to keep that eternal perspective, and let it mould all we do and say. The future with Him is greatly anticipated! Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Very nice, Roy. I do believe it is important to keep that eternal perspective, and let it mould all we do and say. The future with Him is greatly anticipated! Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks Wendy,, for these magnificent comments and a fine review, blessings Roy
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This shows us that no one has to be our enemy. Circumstances can throw us together with folks we normally would avoid, but we learn to get along. Why can't that work every day? Good writing. Made me think. Karen
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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This shows us that no one has to be our enemy. Circumstances can throw us together with folks we normally would avoid, but we learn to get along. Why can't that work every day? Good writing. Made me think. Karen
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks Karen, for these marvellous comments and a super review, blessings Roy
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Comment from judiverse
Great concluding lines in this: "I see beyond this troubled world/ the lion and the calf." I hope and pray we can realize this vision of the world. So true, we can't control the flow of life. As you write, faith in God can direct our path. Excellent rhyme, and elegant wording. A very thoughtful presentation, as you pray that God will "anoint your lips." judi
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Great concluding lines in this: "I see beyond this troubled world/ the lion and the calf." I hope and pray we can realize this vision of the world. So true, we can't control the flow of life. As you write, faith in God can direct our path. Excellent rhyme, and elegant wording. A very thoughtful presentation, as you pray that God will "anoint your lips." judi
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks Judi, for these marvellous comments and a super review, blessings Roy
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You're very welcome. Beautiful, inspiring work. judi
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Bless you
Comment from Begin Again
The wolf will live with the lamb, the leopard will lie down with the goat, the calf and the lion and the yearling together; and a little child will lead them.
Wouldn't this be a wonderful world? If every one who stands on a soap box and declares battle against another American would suddenly stop, get down, and sit together and listen to what each had to say.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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The wolf will live with the lamb, the leopard will lie down with the goat, the calf and the lion and the yearling together; and a little child will lead them.
Wouldn't this be a wonderful world? If every one who stands on a soap box and declares battle against another American would suddenly stop, get down, and sit together and listen to what each had to say.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks Carol, for these marvellous comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sallyo
Love the flow and the rhyme and sentiment as ever with yours but there are a few typos and an Evil Eddie intervention - see below.
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Love the flow and the rhyme and sentiment as ever with yours but there are a few typos and an Evil Eddie intervention - see below.
Wee
We
histry
history (unless you elided it on purpose)
impossioble
impossible
Life's path has been messed up by Evil Eddie
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks Sally, for these marvellous comments and a super review, blessings Roy