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The Final Brick

a poem

10 total reviews 
Comment from tempeste
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I read your foot note and I don't get it.

It's obvious even to someone blind that Zionist Israel dictates over your government.

Netanyahu continues to ignore every recommendation from the White House to limited the civilian killings.


Zionist Netanyahu is in command in Washington.

He does as he pleases and is doing his utmost to drag your country into a full scale war with Iran.

A war your country right now can't afford or win.

I hope that Trump can put a leach and a muzzle on him.

And make peace with Iran.

Under Biden's administration Iran went from selling 300.000 barrels of oil per day to 2 million barrels per day.

The day Biden took office he removed sanctions against China which hurt your economy.

These are plain facts so I really don't get all the hate towards Trump.

Certainly, you are free to express your opinion but I just don't understand the political double standards.












 Comment Written 13-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
    I have said my piece and am done talking about it.
Comment from kahpot
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Yes, I like that, your words of choice are excellent, "the wall of Trump completed;" this line is my favorite, no more people (just Trump) very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
    Thank you, kahpot
Comment from judiverse
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Oh, come on! You know it's not the end of the world. We made it through the Biden years. You've got this poem wrapped up with great rhyme and flow. I must say, Trump has made some rather strange cabinet choices so far. At least give things a chance before you pack up and move to Timbuktu. judi

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Whatever. I give up.
reply by judiverse on 12-Nov-2024
    You'll survive! judi
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Amen Brother. We as a group gave it away. But, we lived through it last time, we will survive this too. We have safe guards built in. Let's hope they are enough again. Karen

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    No safeguards. Trump will fire anyone who isn't a Yes Man.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 13-Nov-2024
    We saw that last time when he got his son in law to do his dirty work. Karen
Comment from lyenochka
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Let's not give in so quickly. God is still in power and anything could happen. Who knows? Maybe like Nebuchadnezzar, Trump will go and eat some grass...

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    I think America ate some grass.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That was really good, Bill. When you think of all the charges he was facing, and got away with them all, and then think of other people who went to prison for less, it does make you wonder how many Trump does own! Well done, short, but to the point. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Thanks, Sandra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh no Bill, democracy has just begun, the bricks will keep out the thieves and robbers and protect the American people. Democracy does not mean you have to share your wealth with other countries! Only those immigrants who are legal should be allowed to stay in the US. Love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Here's the deal, Dolly. The President has the power of Putin now. The entire Congress is conservative and needs no debate to achieve their ends. The Republicans can pass anything on their own. The supreme court has a 6 to 3 majority of conservative judges now. Trump can utter any bill and get the law approved on the same day. All long-term government experts will be replaced by Trumps loyalists. What kept Trump from totally screwing up the government last time was the pushback from the commonsense crowd. They will be replaced by Yes Men.
    Really, you have no idea what is going on here. The world is in trouble.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Four extremely powerful lines that bring tears to my eyes. I believe there will be a day when regret will come to them after it is too late. History will not judge them kindly. thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from Tim Margetts
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The sad truth in a few heartfelt words.
What the hell happened is something that will be debated for a long time to come.
As a Brit, I can only look on at my cousins across the pond, shake my head. And sigh.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    I hope four years is all we have to suffer this.
reply by Tim Margetts on 12-Nov-2024
    I guess that all depends on how much of the Constitution and perhaps the United States themselves are left in four years.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I love how sharp and powerful this piece feels! The first line is perfect giving Trump has a background in contract work. It's a thoughtful and way of sharing your thoughts on the impact of the election. You've done it beautifully. Well done!

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Michael