Dinner Time
Can the posse finally capture the Black Mask Gang?3 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
If I was to guess this author is in their seventies or later, as who else could write in a Western genre. The only faux pas might have been "flicked on" the light as gas lanterns were the lighting of the day.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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If I was to guess this author is in their seventies or later, as who else could write in a Western genre. The only faux pas might have been "flicked on" the light as gas lanterns were the lighting of the day.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Not quite that old, but I did watch lots of John Wayne Westerns when I was a kid, along with The Lone Ranger, & The Cisco kid - all inspirations to this day!
Comment from bob cullen
What a delightful write. I see this as a story for boys approaching their teens. A Roy Rogers type of Western. It flows smoothly, and I sense the lookout out guy may well be on his first ride with a posse. He sees what his imagination tells him. A neat write. But I'm on the side of the baddies, I hope they manage a getaway. Really well-written.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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What a delightful write. I see this as a story for boys approaching their teens. A Roy Rogers type of Western. It flows smoothly, and I sense the lookout out guy may well be on his first ride with a posse. He sees what his imagination tells him. A neat write. But I'm on the side of the baddies, I hope they manage a getaway. Really well-written.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thanks very much, I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed the way you started this with Colt sneaking up over the ridge. I could almost feel the sun's glare myself! The change to Ben's domestic scene was an unexpected change of pace, and I loved the way his conversation with his mom lightened things up. The flicker of movement at the end adds just the right amount of mystery to leave me wanting more. Great job!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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I really enjoyed the way you started this with Colt sneaking up over the ridge. I could almost feel the sun's glare myself! The change to Ben's domestic scene was an unexpected change of pace, and I loved the way his conversation with his mom lightened things up. The flicker of movement at the end adds just the right amount of mystery to leave me wanting more. Great job!
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thanks a lot, I'm glad you enjoyed it.