Anatomy of a Marriage
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Anatomy of a Marriage Ch.10"A story of a couple whose marriage is in trouble.
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Poor Marsha, I can relate, men can be so deceitful. My exhusband and I were in love at the beginning but after 7 years together he decided to mess around with a coworker. We had a good sexual relationship and we never fought. It came like a big surprise.
At least, Barbara was a good friend.
You did a great job telling the story. Well done
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Poor Marsha, I can relate, men can be so deceitful. My exhusband and I were in love at the beginning but after 7 years together he decided to mess around with a coworker. We had a good sexual relationship and we never fought. It came like a big surprise.
At least, Barbara was a good friend.
You did a great job telling the story. Well done
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Gypsy. Sometimes it is really hard to know what a guy might be capable of doing until after you marry them. That has happened to several of my friends and even my children. I appreciate the review.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I continue to find your well written story of a marriage falling apart interesting. I feel so sorry for Marsha. She has more to deal with than one person can hardly stand.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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I continue to find your well written story of a marriage falling apart interesting. I feel so sorry for Marsha. She has more to deal with than one person can hardly stand.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Verna. So many marriages fail and it is bad when children are involved. People should heed the warning signs before they commit to a marriage.
Beth
Comment from joann r romei
This read fine, no error noted, that poor woman, overwhelmed with family problems, and I hope she doesn't find out he never got the vascetomy. Can't wait to hear more.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This read fine, no error noted, that poor woman, overwhelmed with family problems, and I hope she doesn't find out he never got the vascetomy. Can't wait to hear more.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Joann. I appreciate you reviewing my story. I know I to 14 but I'm still thanking people for the earlier reviews.
Beth
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, those signs are so very clear in hindsight.... oy. Another well-written chapter in this tragic saga, my lady... :-) Thanx so much for sharing and look forward to the next! ;) Yvette
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Oh, those signs are so very clear in hindsight.... oy. Another well-written chapter in this tragic saga, my lady... :-) Thanx so much for sharing and look forward to the next! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
Comment from royowen
I love the fact that there is still a room for doubt about Trenton's clandestine activities in the infidelity department, and talking to Barbara, had shed a little light on these things, a very good post Beth, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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I love the fact that there is still a room for doubt about Trenton's clandestine activities in the infidelity department, and talking to Barbara, had shed a little light on these things, a very good post Beth, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Roy. I'm glad I didn't have a husband like Trenton but a lot of my friends did. It wasn't a happy marriage.
Beth
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It's sad
Comment from Jacob1395
I thought you did a brilliant job with this conversation between Barbara and Marsha. I could feel what Marsha was feeling and how much she doesn't want her thoughts to be true. A well written chapter, Beth, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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I thought you did a brilliant job with this conversation between Barbara and Marsha. I could feel what Marsha was feeling and how much she doesn't want her thoughts to be true. A well written chapter, Beth, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Jacob. I'm glad you like my story. I enjoy your comments.
Beth
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Thank you, Jacob. I'm glad you like my story. I enjoy your comments.
Beth
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
"come over an join me?" - make it "and" instead of "an"
I remember hearing about key parties in the 70s - they were a thing for adults bored with their lives and spouses and looking for adventure. I knew someone at school whose parents went to them.
Another good chapter, Beth. This is a good story you have going here.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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"come over an join me?" - make it "and" instead of "an"
I remember hearing about key parties in the 70s - they were a thing for adults bored with their lives and spouses and looking for adventure. I knew someone at school whose parents went to them.
Another good chapter, Beth. This is a good story you have going here.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Since this is actually a fictional version of a true story of my best friend marriage as she related it to me, it did take place in the seventies, so the key parties make sense. I've not heard of them lately.
Comment from lyenochka
I wish everyone had such a good friend as a neighbor. We don't have that anymore as neighbors are only strangers who live nearby. But it's good that Marsha didn't divulge about Bruce's advances. Hoping that Marsha gets good counseling both in parenting and legal options.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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I wish everyone had such a good friend as a neighbor. We don't have that anymore as neighbors are only strangers who live nearby. But it's good that Marsha didn't divulge about Bruce's advances. Hoping that Marsha gets good counseling both in parenting and legal options.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Helen. It is same everyone can have a good friend nearby. Since I've lived in the city, I hardly know my neighbors. I appreciate you reading and commenting on this story.
Beth
Comment from Charles D Ezell
Out of six stars for now but this is so typical among those of the culture you are writing about. It is obvious none of them know nothing about God are his Word. I have known of these situations, and they always end with disaster. Good one, BETH
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Out of six stars for now but this is so typical among those of the culture you are writing about. It is obvious none of them know nothing about God are his Word. I have known of these situations, and they always end with disaster. Good one, BETH
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Since the people in this story are real, I can tell you both the husband and wife were both raised in church by God fearing parents. Life and alcohol have thrown then out of fellowship. Even Christians get off course sometimes.
Comment from Wendy G
Sometimes women assume faithfulness because they believe in their husbands' integrity, but unfortunately, it is often false confidence.
Wendy
Edits: come over an (and) join me?
best friend about Trendon (Trenton) going to rehab,
Bruce said Trendon (Trenton) had a girl
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Sometimes women assume faithfulness because they believe in their husbands' integrity, but unfortunately, it is often false confidence.
Wendy
Edits: come over an (and) join me?
best friend about Trendon (Trenton) going to rehab,
Bruce said Trendon (Trenton) had a girl
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Wendy. I appreciate the review and comments as well as you showed some error I missed.
Beth
