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America loses.4 total reviews
Comment from mrsmajor
Many may not agree with you, but I certainly do.
Sadly this man has managed to persuade people that he's really in their corner...I believe he fought hard to get elected so that he wouldn't have to face all his legal troubles.
Power is what he wants, for himself, and those that believe in him...only!
I believe some people just might be sorry they voted for him when he really gets started making all the changes he has promised.
His supporters are perfectly willing to ignore his lies, and to believe everything he says.
He's a person I could never respect.
Deportation isn't going to be easy, many people that have been working here, even with work visas, are frightened about their future.
How are his authorities
going tell the difference, before we see many innocent people being held in centers.
Yet I haven't read one word, anywhere, about that.
I guess the negatives trump spouts about immigrants, is easy to
swallow when one feels the same way about
other people.
All the best...
Warmly
Victoria
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Many may not agree with you, but I certainly do.
Sadly this man has managed to persuade people that he's really in their corner...I believe he fought hard to get elected so that he wouldn't have to face all his legal troubles.
Power is what he wants, for himself, and those that believe in him...only!
I believe some people just might be sorry they voted for him when he really gets started making all the changes he has promised.
His supporters are perfectly willing to ignore his lies, and to believe everything he says.
He's a person I could never respect.
Deportation isn't going to be easy, many people that have been working here, even with work visas, are frightened about their future.
How are his authorities
going tell the difference, before we see many innocent people being held in centers.
Yet I haven't read one word, anywhere, about that.
I guess the negatives trump spouts about immigrants, is easy to
swallow when one feels the same way about
other people.
All the best...
Warmly
Victoria
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Your review is outstanding, thank you so much for seeing him for who he is. My only hope now is if we can elect more democrats into positions, before he can do great damage.
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You're very welcome, I'm with You, I hope there will be a chance for some Democrats to have input in how this country functions, as a Democracy, I don't believe trump really cares.
Enjoy Your Sunday, doing what makes you happy!
Warmly
Victoria
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This poem speaks volumes. I don't agree with your political views. That's okay, I won't hold them against you though. Hopefully, you can do the same for me. That's the beauty of this country, free choice.
Good luck with your contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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This poem speaks volumes. I don't agree with your political views. That's okay, I won't hold them against you though. Hopefully, you can do the same for me. That's the beauty of this country, free choice.
Good luck with your contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your review.
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You're welcom
Comment from DragonSkulls
I like your little 2-3-2, author. The only problem is that it isn't a 2-3-2. You have 4 syllables in the second line making it a 2-4-2. It needs to be reedited to adhere to the contest rules. What that does is hold the prompt up from going to booth while the FS CEC gives you ample time to fix the one syllable that's off. Just letting you know in case no one else mentioned it and so it doesn't get disqualified for not adhering to the rules. A quick reedit would solve the problem. Maybe use 'his' instead of 'only.' Or 'Only tells lies.' There's many ways to fix it. Let me know when you revise the piece and I'll up the rating. Best of luck.
DS
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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I like your little 2-3-2, author. The only problem is that it isn't a 2-3-2. You have 4 syllables in the second line making it a 2-4-2. It needs to be reedited to adhere to the contest rules. What that does is hold the prompt up from going to booth while the FS CEC gives you ample time to fix the one syllable that's off. Just letting you know in case no one else mentioned it and so it doesn't get disqualified for not adhering to the rules. A quick reedit would solve the problem. Maybe use 'his' instead of 'only.' Or 'Only tells lies.' There's many ways to fix it. Let me know when you revise the piece and I'll up the rating. Best of luck.
DS
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for having my back. I will change to his. Also thank you for your review.
Comment from RodG
Obviously you were not happy with the presidential election's outcome. Neither was I. Your very short 2-3-2 poem succinctly tells us what America can expect in the next four years.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Obviously you were not happy with the presidential election's outcome. Neither was I. Your very short 2-3-2 poem succinctly tells us what America can expect in the next four years.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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I agree. Last time he was in office he followed the playbook of Hitler, now he has a chance to complete his mission. Thank you for your review.