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No schism in the body

A poem

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Okay, difficult to keep my mind focused on the meaning here with that awesome bod standing right there!! Had to scroll up until the pic was no longer 'showing' to actually read your message, sir.... guess that's the effects of 4 plus years of celibacy on the older American women...LOL!! ;) :) Thanx so much for sharing that wonderful message, Sir Roy! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
    Thanks Yvette, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janet Foor
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Excellent poem you have written that reminds us that we are one in him. Many parts and many functions but still one body.
Very well done Roy.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
    Thanks Janet, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Carol Clark2
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I like the repetition of the first two lines of the final stanza. It brings home the message clearly that we are one in Christ. Praise God that we stand righteous in His eyes through Jesus' payment of our debt. Good rhymes, great message. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    Thanks Carol for these super comments and a wonderful review, blessings Roy
reply by Carol Clark2 on 09-Nov-2024
    You're welcome. Blessings to you also.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Hi Roy,

What a great poem as always. I feel your deep faith in all the poems you write. Great job.

There is a line in the second stanza last line: For God created man {ns} Earth

Take a look and see what you think.


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    Thanks Cecilia, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from ESOSTINE
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Another outstanding work, Roy. Their is no pain in belonging to the Body of Christ. In Him man's yolk is made light. All who have faith and do the will of God stand approved, worthy. Well done, dear Roy.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    Thanks again, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Teri7
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Roy, This is a very well written and true poem you have penned. If we are in Christ we are a new creature. Thank you for sharing this today my brother! Teri

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    Thanks Teri, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from jim vecchio
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Just as God is in three persons: The Father, Son, and Holy Ghost. Is there a schism in God? NO!!! Are there three Gods? NO!!! God is ONE God, but the three have different offices to perform, and never does one try to take superiority over another.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    Thanks Jim, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for teaching me a new word. schism - I had to look it up. It's a great word to use in this situation. Thank you for sharing this God inspired poem with us. Your talent shines brightly.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    Thanks Barbara, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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There are different functions and gifts that come through Christ, but all must be according to the will of God. Today that is not the case with so many different denominations. However, the body of Christ has never changed, therefore, those in Christ, stand united. My grandma use to say when something is true, it is, when it is not, it cannot be. Translation: The truth is always the truth, anything less, is not the truth.
RJ

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    Thanks RJ, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by RJ Heritage on 08-Nov-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from Wendy G
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Our only ability to stand is because we are safe within His love, a part of His international and intergenerational body, and loved by Him.
Wendy
Edit: for God created man ns Earth. (on Earth?)

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
    Thanks Wendy for these terrific comments and lovely review, blessings Roy