Love's Presence
is a gift that unites two souls as 'One'6 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
Your poem about love shines like its subject. I love all the ways you express love.
Very beautiful words.
Good luck in the contest!
Best wishes,
Cindy
A very endearing work!
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Author,
Your poem about love shines like its subject. I love all the ways you express love.
Very beautiful words.
Good luck in the contest!
Best wishes,
Cindy
A very endearing work!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
Comment from zanya
This poem is absolutely beautiful in its outline of love - real and abiding love that is to say, wholly unlike the love that seems to be so lauded in our time the gaudy, showy type of love- some exquisite lines' to risk the fall into another's soul.
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This poem is absolutely beautiful in its outline of love - real and abiding love that is to say, wholly unlike the love that seems to be so lauded in our time the gaudy, showy type of love- some exquisite lines' to risk the fall into another's soul.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
Comment from Sugarray77
Great job on crafting this lovely verse. You've written a very good FreeVerse that really does a good job of sharing the nuances, reality and the substance of true loving ways. I enjoyed reading it and wish you luck in the contest. I also enjoyed the different colored fonts... creative and fun.
Melissa
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Great job on crafting this lovely verse. You've written a very good FreeVerse that really does a good job of sharing the nuances, reality and the substance of true loving ways. I enjoyed reading it and wish you luck in the contest. I also enjoyed the different colored fonts... creative and fun.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Love is all athese things you mentioned and this
Submission
Of yours is or should be truly memorable especially to
The
One you wrote it to.
I also
Feel as is is
Akin to the
Grand poets of the 15th century
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Love is all athese things you mentioned and this
Submission
Of yours is or should be truly memorable especially to
The
One you wrote it to.
I also
Feel as is is
Akin to the
Grand poets of the 15th century
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
Comment from Tim Margetts
I enjoyed this, though, and I am sure there is a valid reason for it, I didn't get the bold highlighting of some sections, At first I thought it might be a repeating phrase but no.
Ah well, it didn't take anything away from my enjoyment of the poem.
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I enjoyed this, though, and I am sure there is a valid reason for it, I didn't get the bold highlighting of some sections, At first I thought it might be a repeating phrase but no.
Ah well, it didn't take anything away from my enjoyment of the poem.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
This is a wonderful, poetic account of what love is, recognising the subtle elements playing out (for the blessed) amid the humdrum ordinary-ness of daily life.
I loved these lines...
'It mends without needles,
binds without chains'
Well done :)
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This is a wonderful, poetic account of what love is, recognising the subtle elements playing out (for the blessed) amid the humdrum ordinary-ness of daily life.
I loved these lines...
'It mends without needles,
binds without chains'
Well done :)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024