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A Ghost Walks Into a Heist

Two bumbling thieves accidentally unleash mischievous ghost

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Comment from royowen
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One always likes to see bad people be hurt and miss the bus, and best of all to hear them turn away from their wicked, wicked ways, beautifully and written so well, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Lol, The kids were watching the 3 stooges, that was my inspiration for this! but yes in any of my stories good always triumphs. this just happens to be a little bumbling slapstick triumph
reply by royowen on 27-Oct-2024
    I STILL DO
Comment from Kahlani
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Oh, what a bumbling pair of fools. They deserved what they got. Don't they say that crime doesn't pay. Very entertaining full of humor and cussing. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    thanks for the compliments, I had fun writing it