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You are a Mess!

Life can make you feel like you are crazy sometimes!

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Comment from royowen
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To live in a house of strong minded people is a task for any parent, I think you've written a wonderful poem and a Lesson in how to do it, beautifully written and presented so well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You paint a humorous picture of a Grandma who never gives up, someone who has many faults but is always well meaning, I enjoyed your warm words about Grandma, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024

Comment from Y. M. Roger
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What a lovely collection of entertaining and somewhat thought-provoking couplets... absolutely enjoyed every one of them! ;) But, remembering time and date? Well...(lol!) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! :)

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024

Comment from Tom Horonzy
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This says to me what I intended harmlessly in Unsipidly Undelectable
Chk it out
Be well
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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

Comment from Kahlani
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I love this poem for a couple of reasons. First it flows beautifully making it easy for the reader and secondly it's funny. Humor is the most attractive thing about poetry because it keeps the audience engaged. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

Comment from bob cullen
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I love this, in fact I may even adopt as my new life philosophy. Why should be even allow factual evidence to spoil our story. Those damn do-gooders are a pain in the rear end.
So, as I say to everyone, do just what you like,
And if the police come, tell them to go take a hike
Worst thing they can do, is put you in a cell
And if that happens , just yell, an' yell, an' yell.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024