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Obsession

Reading the signals

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Comment from lancellot
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Hmm, not sure of the topic, unless it's saying that criminal assault on a man by a woman is okay. Structurally, I think there is an overuse of adjectives, and an underdeveloped story. I recommend rethinking this one.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
    Thanks.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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It seems to heavily be a male trait, that they sense"hidden" messages in everything we do. Sending them special I love you's in code, known only to them. Even when we tell them to leave us alone loudy and often, They interpret it to mean, That we are just saying that to throw others off the scent. Men!!! Karen

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Karen.