Equinox
'tween Summer and Winter2 total reviews
Comment from karenina
I'm sitting here on a crisp Autumn afternoon, with the snap-apple crisp winds whirling the mutli-colored leaves around. A perfect time to come upon this little gem. Was this a contest entry? (I noticed your first reviewer wished you luck but did not note a contest announcement)
No matter, because the three stanzas of 4/5/4 count with a repetitive third line work very well...and "Fall" is certainly firmly established this 26th of October!
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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I'm sitting here on a crisp Autumn afternoon, with the snap-apple crisp winds whirling the mutli-colored leaves around. A perfect time to come upon this little gem. Was this a contest entry? (I noticed your first reviewer wished you luck but did not note a contest announcement)
No matter, because the three stanzas of 4/5/4 count with a repetitive third line work very well...and "Fall" is certainly firmly established this 26th of October!
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Karen,
Thank you for all your wonderful reviews. The contest is a 3-5-3 Fall rerelated haiku.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment from Y. M. Roger
An inviting and picturesque description for the contest here.. Fall certainly does draw near!! ;) Well done ... Well said! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
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An inviting and picturesque description for the contest here.. Fall certainly does draw near!! ;) Well done ... Well said! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
