Autumn Time
3/5/3 Suite10 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, zanya.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and good concluding line.
-Good use of alliteration in verse one.
-Good description of the moon and internal rhyme.
-A very good concluding verse.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation, zanya.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and good concluding line.
-Good use of alliteration in verse one.
-Good description of the moon and internal rhyme.
-A very good concluding verse.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
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Great review zanya
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You are welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
You have mentioned three aspects of nature which seem to characterise the appeal of Autumn and the cooler days, and presented them with lyrical words. Well done. Best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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You have mentioned three aspects of nature which seem to characterise the appeal of Autumn and the cooler days, and presented them with lyrical words. Well done. Best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
So far you are the best I have read. So much is written the same ordinary way as ever. Yours has a bit of a different tone. I enjoyed it. Enjoy the week. Karen
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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So far you are the best I have read. So much is written the same ordinary way as ever. Yours has a bit of a different tone. I enjoyed it. Enjoy the week. Karen
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from bob cullen
This is so nice, in so many ways. First up, it flows deliciously, Second, it tells the story of seasons so accurately. And thirdly, it sits so nicely on screen.
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This is so nice, in so many ways. First up, it flows deliciously, Second, it tells the story of seasons so accurately. And thirdly, it sits so nicely on screen.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
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Thanks for a superb review zanya
Comment from royowen
That has been the structure of the lune poem in the of 3/5/3, but I think you've done a great job in these three seperate poems in this great suite of haiku, well dine, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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That has been the structure of the lune poem in the of 3/5/3, but I think you've done a great job in these three seperate poems in this great suite of haiku, well dine, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
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Thanks for a great reveiw zanya
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Most welcome
Comment from gansach
This is a beautiful presentation for the 3-5-3 Fall~related haiku suite. It's very descriptive and sensory. The only wonder I had was if you intentionally didn't capitalize twinkle in the third stanza for a reason? Very nicely done!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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This is a beautiful presentation for the 3-5-3 Fall~related haiku suite. It's very descriptive and sensory. The only wonder I had was if you intentionally didn't capitalize twinkle in the third stanza for a reason? Very nicely done!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
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Thanks for a superb review zanya
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful offering for the contest that paints a wonderful autumn pic for the reader while planting the tune of 'autumn time' in their mind.. good job! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
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A wonderful offering for the contest that paints a wonderful autumn pic for the reader while planting the tune of 'autumn time' in their mind.. good job! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
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Thanks for reading and sharing zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You painted ambient pictures of Autumn here and I enjoyed your scenes and wish you luck with the contest. The nights are drawing in and so we hibernate at this time of year, love Dolly x
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You painted ambient pictures of Autumn here and I enjoyed your scenes and wish you luck with the contest. The nights are drawing in and so we hibernate at this time of year, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Beautiful.poem. I like the way you wrote it with using Autumn time. The picture goes well.with it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Beautiful.poem. I like the way you wrote it with using Autumn time. The picture goes well.with it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Write a 3-5-3 Fall Rerelated Haiku writing prompt. You describe a beautiful Fall evening and the reader's mind is filled with lovely images.
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An excellent entry for the Write a 3-5-3 Fall Rerelated Haiku writing prompt. You describe a beautiful Fall evening and the reader's mind is filled with lovely images.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
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Thanks for reading and sharing zanya
