Autumn Comforts
A 3-5-3 poem4 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
That is a sweet trio of 3-5-3 stanzas. You skillfully hinted at more than leaves falling a girl in autumn. The repetition of "Make her smile" makes me think that the falling leaves are invoking memories or desires of another "kiss". Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
  |
That is a sweet trio of 3-5-3 stanzas. You skillfully hinted at more than leaves falling a girl in autumn. The repetition of "Make her smile" makes me think that the falling leaves are invoking memories or desires of another "kiss". Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
-
You hit the nail on the head. Indeed I was hinting at Autumn memories that made the girl smile. Many thanks, lyenochka, for taking the time to read and comment on this poem. Rod
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have your first vote.
Your last stanza is the best and resonates with me.
You captured the beauty of walking through the woods.. in my case chestnut woods.
I love the brownish golden shades and the crisp sound as I advance
but above all I love that soothing vibe the woods emanates.
It makes me feel happy and I smile a lot.. I really feel at home amidst my woods.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
|
Ciao mystery poet, you now have your first vote.
Your last stanza is the best and resonates with me.
You captured the beauty of walking through the woods.. in my case chestnut woods.
I love the brownish golden shades and the crisp sound as I advance
but above all I love that soothing vibe the woods emanates.
It makes me feel happy and I smile a lot.. I really feel at home amidst my woods.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
-
Replies are not getting through again. I do want to thank you, tempeste, for your praise of my haiku suite and your vote.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 3-5-3 Fall rerelated haiku writing prompt. A nice scene you bring out with your words and the picture you used is perfect for the presentation. Nice job.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
|
An excellent entry for the 3-5-3 Fall rerelated haiku writing prompt. A nice scene you bring out with your words and the picture you used is perfect for the presentation. Nice job.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
-
Thank you very much, Marilyn. Your praise is much appreciated.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written 3-5-3 poem for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
|
This is a very beautiful and well written 3-5-3 poem for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
-
Please read my revised poem, now a suite. Many thanks for your praise of the single stanza.
