Covenants
free verse3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful free verse for the contest here... however, I'm not sure how it fits with the title of 'competition' as defined in the contest listing...? Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
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A beautiful free verse for the contest here... however, I'm not sure how it fits with the title of 'competition' as defined in the contest listing...? Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I think you are watching and reading too much news. This poem seems a trifle bloody. You seem to be advocating war. We need to cease all weapons and use words. And agreements, and sharing. I guess you think since we stole all the land and resources from the indians you intend we all should get in our boats and leave now? Karen
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I think you are watching and reading too much news. This poem seems a trifle bloody. You seem to be advocating war. We need to cease all weapons and use words. And agreements, and sharing. I guess you think since we stole all the land and resources from the indians you intend we all should get in our boats and leave now? Karen
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a gentle faithful poem and I hung onto your every word here as I finally enjoyed the conclusion. I enjoyed this warm and soothing journey and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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This is a gentle faithful poem and I hung onto your every word here as I finally enjoyed the conclusion. I enjoyed this warm and soothing journey and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024