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The Right Path

575 Poem

13 total reviews 
Comment from Carol Clark2
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There is much wisdom in your 5-7-5 poem, Patricia. That's such a peaceful looking road in the picture. Alas, life's paths are not that smooth, but as you say, the right one is the best one to take. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024

Comment from GWHARGIS
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The more obstacles you have to overcome, the more appreciative you are for the destination. We all have to overcome things in life, but you have to go on. Leave the past in the past and keep moving forward. Beautifully written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    With gratitude admired, and I wish she said for a nice review
Comment from jim vecchio
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This premise makes total sense. I was just writing to roy owen how Jonathan and his father had to die so God's chosen, David could ascend the throne. Jonathan's path was not the simplest or easiest way to go, but it was the path God chose,.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Your reviews are always special thank you so much
Comment from evilynne
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So true, your well-chosen words of wisdom. The easiest way to go is certainly not always the right way. I think most of us learn that as we mature. We find our faith often shows the way to go.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much for your kind review. I appreciate it
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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So true the right path is often the hardest, but most rewarding and the path God wants us to travel. We need to follow the journey God has prepared for us. Thank you for sharing your wisdom in this poem.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    With gratitude in my heart, I wish to thank you for a nice review
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Hi Patricia,
I love that you can express a whole idea in to to three sentences. As always you have nailed another on. Is it hard or easy for you to come up with your ideas? I love your poems. Please keep them coming.

Cecilia(Cece)

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    I am always grateful when I get nice reviews like this. Thank you so much.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 22-Oct-2024
    Pat you deserve good reviews. Your poems are awesome
Comment from RJ Heritage
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This is so true. I like your descriptive expression and the way you chose to present your poem. Thank you for sharing thus with me.
Hope you are well.
RJ

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. I appreciate it.
reply by RJ Heritage on 22-Oct-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is so true, we have to be careful with our decisions in life and sometimes life can be difficult, but nothing worth having is easy to obtain, love Dolly x x x x

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Thank you for this lovely review. It is much appreciate
Comment from bob cullen
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I rarely rate these really short poems. But this one really does deliver a solid message. The other thing to remember on any journey, is the location. If it's good, the time taking travelling is well spent.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Thank you for a lovely review. I appreciate it a great deal.
Comment from lyenochka
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So true! And we need the Holy Spirit to guide us and keep us on the right path and the narrow way as it's easy to get distracted and end up on the wrong path!

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    I am always grateful when I get such nice reviews as this