The Mountain
A Nonet4 total reviews
Comment from EeanBlack
Blah, blah, blah, Shirley. No, I'm kidding. I'm at a moment in my life where I have had to fire the Sherpa and continue to the summit alone. The air is quite thin here. Lol. That must be why my writing seems to ramble and ramble and ramble... It's such a great concept, not forgetting others.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Blah, blah, blah, Shirley. No, I'm kidding. I'm at a moment in my life where I have had to fire the Sherpa and continue to the summit alone. The air is quite thin here. Lol. That must be why my writing seems to ramble and ramble and ramble... It's such a great concept, not forgetting others.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Eean. I'm still struggling through the foothills, so if you do fall off please don't squash me!!
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Making fun of a man's weight is not becoming of a lady here in America. We are sensitive. It must be all that soy milk. I hear it raises the level of estrogen in a man's body. I think I'm actually growing boo- Oh, man! Lol.
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I'm working towards becoming a lady - but it's not easy...
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Me too. Not.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Ah at last, I have a six! This reminds me a bit of The Sound of Music (Climb every Mountain) but nothing wrong with that because I can sing along with your lovely, elevating sentiments! Not only does this inspire with fresh air and challenge, but it reminds those who reach the top not to look down on those who haven't yet made it. Nice play on the words "rise up." Another strong contender (I think you've won at least twice since we last spoke:)) and a joy to read. Good luck, Shirley! Debbie xx
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Ah at last, I have a six! This reminds me a bit of The Sound of Music (Climb every Mountain) but nothing wrong with that because I can sing along with your lovely, elevating sentiments! Not only does this inspire with fresh air and challenge, but it reminds those who reach the top not to look down on those who haven't yet made it. Nice play on the words "rise up." Another strong contender (I think you've won at least twice since we last spoke:)) and a joy to read. Good luck, Shirley! Debbie xx
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Wow, Debbie, thanks SO much for your lovely words and brill rating :) xx
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Hi Shirley Ann,
Loved your poem. I have yet to learn to write this style. You have a great talent. I hope you win the contest with this entry. Good luck to in your future endeavors.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Hi Shirley Ann,
Loved your poem. I have yet to learn to write this style. You have a great talent. I hope you win the contest with this entry. Good luck to in your future endeavors.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Cecilia.
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Your welcome
Comment from Nicki.B
I love this poem of positivity reminds us all that we must remind ourselves what we have that is good in our lives and how we can reach high for our goals and celebrate even the small wins
Well done.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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I love this poem of positivity reminds us all that we must remind ourselves what we have that is good in our lives and how we can reach high for our goals and celebrate even the small wins
Well done.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Nicki.
