Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

and don't they look as if they're all gathered in parliament being brought to order by the Speaker! A clever and evocative little verse with pleasing fluency and alliteration. Well done and good luck! My favourite. Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024

Thanks for a great review Zanya

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
This poem fits the prompt well. I didn't know that a group of owls is called a parliament. I like the internal rhyme in the last line.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck with the prompt.
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024

Thanks for reviewing zanya

reply by dragonpoet on 24-Oct-2024

No problem, Zanya.
Joan

Comment from F. William Lester

Excellent

They look studious and very business-like. No messing around here. By their unsmiling faces, they don't the world is "punny." Sorry. I had to throw that in. Nice work. Good luck in the contest and have a great week. Be well.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024

Thanks for reading and reveiwing zanya

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Strange that a gathering of owls would be called a Parliament, but then they are considered wise - something I am not sure that I can say for others in high offices any more. Very well done!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024

Thanks for reviewing zanya