Wool-gathering
A sheepish offering4 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Terry,
So you didn't feel you had enough sheep puns in you poem causing you had to put more groaners in your notes. I am glad Hugh feels enough for Sue to search for her. If Hugh is so rampant, maybe Sue got lost on purpose.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Hi Terry,
So you didn't feel you had enough sheep puns in you poem causing you had to put more groaners in your notes. I am glad Hugh feels enough for Sue to search for her. If Hugh is so rampant, maybe Sue got lost on purpose.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Maa-rvellous. Thanks, Joan.
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Oh come on, Terry. That's taking it a little too far isn't it. but to keep it going. Ewe are very welcome.
Joan
P S Just to let you know I have just published a book called "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry" by Joan Pechter. It is available on Amazon.com.
Comment from F. William Lester
Nice work and a witty play on words. I laughed because it reminded me of being a kid in LA and watching LA Rams play. Their cheerleaders were called the Embraceable Ewes. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Nice work and a witty play on words. I laughed because it reminded me of being a kid in LA and watching LA Rams play. Their cheerleaders were called the Embraceable Ewes. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thank ewe!
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Ewe are very welcome.
Comment from docsoc
As a guy who grew up on a farm and has many happy memories of farm animals, I totally enjoy this poem. The puns are incredibly clever. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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As a guy who grew up on a farm and has many happy memories of farm animals, I totally enjoy this poem. The puns are incredibly clever. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Thanks a bunch!
Comment from ESOSTINE
The poem speaks of the one of the critical needs of man, companionship. He feels something missing when companionship is lacking. He keeps searching, but sometimes never finds in his fellow being. Well done, dear
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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The poem speaks of the one of the critical needs of man, companionship. He feels something missing when companionship is lacking. He keeps searching, but sometimes never finds in his fellow being. Well done, dear
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Lovely words, Esostine. Thank you.
