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French Kiss

One of life*s shared pleasures.

2 total reviews 
Comment from docsoc
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

A well thought out and cleverly executed poem. You draw the reader in. The build up to the kiss is loving and sensual. You know where you're going with this. I like your choice of words as you lead in to the climax.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
    So very kind. Much appreciated.
Comment from DonandVicki
Excellent
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I can remember my first French kiss, those kisses are hard to forget. A you said; "One of life's shared pleasures." I couldn't have said it better. Well written.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
    Many thanks.