Liar
Just Another Poem of the Times.5 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
A poem written for these times. I like the one line that spoke to me: "While they pile on the glory, wealth, and fame, but only for themselves." I pray better times ahead.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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A poem written for these times. I like the one line that spoke to me: "While they pile on the glory, wealth, and fame, but only for themselves." I pray better times ahead.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Me too, but I have a strong feeling that it won't be any time soon. Let's hope I'm wrong. Thanks for your review, much appreciated.
Comment from jim vecchio
many people have made their fame (and also their shame) by striding on the backs of others. But there are also decent, pure men who honor The Lord and serving Him to the welfare of others.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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many people have made their fame (and also their shame) by striding on the backs of others. But there are also decent, pure men who honor The Lord and serving Him to the welfare of others.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Absolutely, true and we must never forget these, thanks for the reminder.
Comment from Kahlani
I was just about to write that you should turn this into a song (I was thinking of rap because of the rhyme) when I read your biography. You are a songwriter!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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I was just about to write that you should turn this into a song (I was thinking of rap because of the rhyme) when I read your biography. You are a songwriter!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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Yes, K. I tried and dabbled in a bit of both, thank you for your review.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Yes,I did like it. Something different and bearing some truth that pervades throughout the poem. Thanks for sharing and I wish you all the best in the competition.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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Yes,I did like it. Something different and bearing some truth that pervades throughout the poem. Thanks for sharing and I wish you all the best in the competition.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much, Barry, much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds a bit like a rap song in progress here as you condemn these liars for their deceit and treachery. I enjoyed your powerful poem for the contest and wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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This sounds a bit like a rap song in progress here as you condemn these liars for their deceit and treachery. I enjoyed your powerful poem for the contest and wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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Hmm, I'm touched, thank you.
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You are most welcome x