Old Flame?
50 Word Flash Fiction3 total reviews
Comment from F. William Lester
Nicely done. Charlie didn't choose to live in the past and in most cases that's for the best. I found the middle a little confusing. Born in a generation that isn't necessarily tech savvy, it took me a moment to understand the scrolling, which was apparently on his phone. I assumed the dialogue was a memory. Fifty words of prose is difficult at best. You did a credible job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Nicely done. Charlie didn't choose to live in the past and in most cases that's for the best. I found the middle a little confusing. Born in a generation that isn't necessarily tech savvy, it took me a moment to understand the scrolling, which was apparently on his phone. I assumed the dialogue was a memory. Fifty words of prose is difficult at best. You did a credible job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
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You're very welcome.
Comment from DonandVicki
The one genre that guarantees that the reader engages his imagination is through short flash fiction. So few words well written, leads me to visualise a lost romance.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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The one genre that guarantees that the reader engages his imagination is through short flash fiction. So few words well written, leads me to visualise a lost romance.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Nicki.B
Haha! I was wondering where this was going to go. And I really didn't think it would go how it did, so love that and unexpected twist to this short story. It really made me laugh. I went on to read the prompt and laughed some more, wrote a dribble story with 50 word count! Ah refreshing. Good luck with the contest. Well done!
Best wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Haha! I was wondering where this was going to go. And I really didn't think it would go how it did, so love that and unexpected twist to this short story. It really made me laugh. I went on to read the prompt and laughed some more, wrote a dribble story with 50 word count! Ah refreshing. Good luck with the contest. Well done!
Best wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Great review - glad you enjoyed it, Zanya
