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His Silence

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Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?

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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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The cinch is beginning to tighten around Danielle and Callum. Control is oozing out of all of them. A little love interest for Callum...hmmm...

Very engaging, my friend. It's still as good now as it was in the beginning. Great way to keep the interest going.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Rhonda, I'm pleased that you're enjoying it.
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 19-Oct-2024
    You're welcome. It's delightful.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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It seems as if Danielle is thinking of Callum as more than a brother, but it is hard to break old habits. It also seems as if they are being watched and not quite trusted.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
    Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Noah may know something. I don't like all this secrecy. They are hiding something. I worry about Danielle and Callum's safety.

If we were on the other side of the house we would've been able to have escaped onto the driveway. (house,)

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Try as she may, Danielle, still can't get answers and the worrying thing for her is if Callum becomes hooked on Eve which could increase his commitment to the centre and narrow his perspective. All very intriguing, Jacob. And you keep that mystery going. Well done! Edits below. Debbie
Thank God (,) Abraham
man(a)ged

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This chapter really drew me in! What a complex narrative. I love how you create the atmosphere, especially with the muddy field. Your portrayal of Grace's inner conflict is so well done. The dialogue feels natural. I'm interested about what will happen next. Keep up the fantastic work!

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Thank you Michael, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
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New information is hard to come by. It looks as though Eve thinks she might have met her soulmate, and Danielle is just a bit jealous although she thinks she isn't interested in him in that way. It wouldn't be good if she is ready and anxious to leave and Callum has fallen for Eve and decided to stay

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
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Spies are watching from every direction. I have a feeling nothing gets past Mary or Oliver... or almost anyone, I suppose. Like a streaming network! Danielle and Callum don't know anything more than they did. And Eve has her sights set on Callum, I think. Another good chapter, Jacob.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.