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Turn Right at the Moon - Part 3

1,150 words. Let's meet Chloe.

2 total reviews 
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Hi Mike,
A great story taking bits of our life and society and projecting it onto a science fiction background. People are people, that is the gist of your story. Beyond that, it's a great tale about a woman and how she handles security and herself.

Great job,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024

Comment from estory
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It pays to have good friends. The trooper seems to show up at just the right moment. Part sci fi, part western pulp fiction, part dark comedy, this story illustrates how people don't really change much and how the past and the future and technology mean little against human nature. estory

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024