Revelation Revealed
Don't be left behind...11 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
This is a real interesting one. Based on text and picture, I am reminded of the prophetic words of Revelation. The 1-6-1 is superbly done with context made understandable. Nice one. Lots of message in 8 syllables.
Z
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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This is a real interesting one. Based on text and picture, I am reminded of the prophetic words of Revelation. The 1-6-1 is superbly done with context made understandable. Nice one. Lots of message in 8 syllables.
Z
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Hey there, Z! Thanx so much for the review on this one, sir... am finding that many of the folks I 'knew' years ago either are not here anymore or have stopped getting notices as I have found on a few of them... oy. :-/ Take care and keep on grinnin'! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome. I'm grinnin' right now...😁
Comment from phoegon
This is epic. I like the pairing of the image and the poem, even down to the choice of font for the poem it is great. Great work! I feel like this can be apart of a larger story written in poem verse as well.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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This is epic. I like the pairing of the image and the poem, even down to the choice of font for the poem it is great. Great work! I feel like this can be apart of a larger story written in poem verse as well.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Awesome! Thank you for that enthusiastic review and those shining stars! Both are much appreciated!!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
good entry to the contest. I will have a lot of competition. I like the image you chose to fit the poem's theme of revelations and the end times coming soon if you believe in all of that, which I do not.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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good entry to the contest. I will have a lot of competition. I like the image you chose to fit the poem's theme of revelations and the end times coming soon if you believe in all of that, which I do not.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Many thanks for your review on this short form.
Comment from jaded831
Your poem has great tone, and followed the rules. It made me think and scared me thinking about the revelation. I enjoyed your poem, but I hate being scared. The picture made your words more intense.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Your poem has great tone, and followed the rules. It made me think and scared me thinking about the revelation. I enjoyed your poem, but I hate being scared. The picture made your words more intense.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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OMG!! Thank you so very much for such a lively review and those wonderful stars! Glad (?) I could evoke some strong emotions out there! :) :)
Comment from ESOSTINE
the poem met the structure and the specifications of the 1-6-1 contest entry. Angels with wings took off as fear took hold. Thanks for sharing your reflections, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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the poem met the structure and the specifications of the 1-6-1 contest entry. Angels with wings took off as fear took hold. Thanks for sharing your reflections, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Many thanks for your review on this short one - much appreciated! ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These look like scary angels to me and your wrote a fine post for the contest, love the rhymes and the sentiments of Halloween, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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These look like scary angels to me and your wrote a fine post for the contest, love the rhymes and the sentiments of Halloween, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Many thanks for your review on this short one - much appreciated!
Comment from Kahlani
I enjoyed reading your 1-6-1 rhyme. I know it can't be as easy as it looks, but I want to try it sometime. Well done on a gorgeous presentation and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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I enjoyed reading your 1-6-1 rhyme. I know it can't be as easy as it looks, but I want to try it sometime. Well done on a gorgeous presentation and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Many thanks for your review on this short one - much appreciated!
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
such a spiritual poetry and i liked the imagery of angels flying away as well as the powerful message behind your philosophical verses " don't be left behind "
your painting is further portraying your amazing 1-6-1 poem
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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such a spiritual poetry and i liked the imagery of angels flying away as well as the powerful message behind your philosophical verses " don't be left behind "
your painting is further portraying your amazing 1-6-1 poem
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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OMG!! Thank you so very much for such a lively review and those wonderful stars! Glad I could evoke some strong emotions out there! :) :)
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Rhyme That 1-6-1 writing prompt. There will be a day, possibly some day soon, when in the blink of an eye all who believe will taken up to Glory. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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An excellent entry for the Rhyme That 1-6-1 writing prompt. There will be a day, possibly some day soon, when in the blink of an eye all who believe will taken up to Glory. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Many thanks for your review on this short one - much appreciated!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh wow, mystery writer, this 1-6-1 poem really hits you where it hurts!! If you are a demon, that is!!
I love the imagery and reminder of what happens in the end to the dread givers. Raise those wings, Angels!! Send them packing.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Oh wow, mystery writer, this 1-6-1 poem really hits you where it hurts!! If you are a demon, that is!!
I love the imagery and reminder of what happens in the end to the dread givers. Raise those wings, Angels!! Send them packing.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Many thanks for your review on this short one, Rhonda - much appreciated!
