Comment from RodG

Excellent

You have succeeded in describing a slowly-ending sunset in only eight syllables while also fulfilling the rhyme requirements of this challenging contest. Good focus on color with just two words--"glow" and "red." Rod

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024

Thank you for your encouraging feedback.

Comment from Gayla putnam

Good

It is a very challenging project. Kudos to you. Your selection of a picture to accompany the poem is nice. I read it several times and wondered if it would have worked better if Show and Glow changed places. That's just a suggestion for you to consider, its not like I would be brave enough to write poetry. gayla

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024

I did consider your suggestion, however, upon due consideration I elected to go with the current presentation. Thanks for your feedback.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

We all appreciate a good sunset and I have seen a few in my time and I enjoyed your ambient words here, a fine presentation for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024

Thank you for the read and your feedback.
Appreciated.