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Thy Will Be Done

Life is a privilege, a gift unearned

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Comment from F. William Lester
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A pleasant and powerful thought to begin the day. As I age, the reality of this privilege becomes more evident by the day. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024

Comment from Julie Helms
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This is a beautiful poem of the daily renewal of God's provision in our life.
I really like this line:
My body clock reset by hands, unseen.

It is only by his grace that that the atoms in the universe stay together, and that we can even get out of bed in the morning. The vast and the personal.
I enjoyed this thought-provoking poem!
Julie
:-)

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2024

Comment from DonandVicki
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It was the first line of your well composed poem that drew me into your work: "I awaken by will not my own," I think that it is by the will of God that we get to awake each day.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2024