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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem has good analogy within. So many people hide within their own cocoon and miss out on chances and opportunities of life. Well done. Good sensory appeal. Xo. M
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem has good analogy within. So many people hide within their own cocoon and miss out on chances and opportunities of life. Well done. Good sensory appeal. Xo. M
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, M. xoxox
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and a great metaphor for us. So tempting to hide away and not take chances. We short change ourselves by doing so, guilty as charged.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and a great metaphor for us. So tempting to hide away and not take chances. We short change ourselves by doing so, guilty as charged.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Mike. Happy Weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem is such a beautiful metaphor for life. How many times, and we all do it, refuse to do something because we are afraid to step up and take that chance? Thank you for sharing your talent and your message with us.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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This poem is such a beautiful metaphor for life. How many times, and we all do it, refuse to do something because we are afraid to step up and take that chance? Thank you for sharing your talent and your message with us.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. Happy Weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
love the bottom pic!!
sometimes i feel like i'm that butterfly lol!
great imagistic naani
though a naani is only 4 lines, but i like the flow of the five lines
only suggestion i can make is to put lines 3 & 4 on the same line
fearful butterfly
hides in its cocoon
missing an extraordinary chance
to fly
cool animated pics
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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love the bottom pic!!
sometimes i feel like i'm that butterfly lol!
great imagistic naani
though a naani is only 4 lines, but i like the flow of the five lines
only suggestion i can make is to put lines 3 & 4 on the same line
fearful butterfly
hides in its cocoon
missing an extraordinary chance
to fly
cool animated pics
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. I made the correction, thanks! Happy Weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Such a worrying time for that poor, fragile butterfly which won't even be able to fly until the moisture has dried out. And then only surviving a couple of weeks if lucky. Love the presentation! Very soothing! And your charming verse is infused with a note of poignancy. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Such a worrying time for that poor, fragile butterfly which won't even be able to fly until the moisture has dried out. And then only surviving a couple of weeks if lucky. Love the presentation! Very soothing! And your charming verse is infused with a note of poignancy. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie. Happy Weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
This is a wonderful naani poem! It reminds me of a person that misses out on so much in life by being afraid to fly.
Nice symbolism and graphics, Gypsy.
Excellent,
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Gypsy,
This is a wonderful naani poem! It reminds me of a person that misses out on so much in life by being afraid to fly.
Nice symbolism and graphics, Gypsy.
Excellent,
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Cindy. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
I think this teaches us an important life lesson. We need to overcome our fear in order to grasp certain opportunities that come our way. When we hide away we might miss them altogether.
Thanks for sharing
RJ
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I think this teaches us an important life lesson. We need to overcome our fear in order to grasp certain opportunities that come our way. When we hide away we might miss them altogether.
Thanks for sharing
RJ
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
I wonder if there are cocoons that remain the habitat for life. I would think they'd die if they don't become moths or butterflies. You made me curious so I checked that in deserts some stay up to 3 years in the cocoon until the conditions are better for life. There are lots of reasons to be fearful these days!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I wonder if there are cocoons that remain the habitat for life. I would think they'd die if they don't become moths or butterflies. You made me curious so I checked that in deserts some stay up to 3 years in the cocoon until the conditions are better for life. There are lots of reasons to be fearful these days!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words, big sister. Have a wonderful weekend!
MariVal 😊 😘
Comment from royowen
I think there's a lot of truth in that story, it's really a metaphor about those who choose safety in preference to adventure, the only trouble is one is still subject to danger one way or 'tother. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I think there's a lot of truth in that story, it's really a metaphor about those who choose safety in preference to adventure, the only trouble is one is still subject to danger one way or 'tother. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
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