2024 Japanese Poetry
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8 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi Gypsy,
Written with eloquence, style and perfection.
Beautifully presented as always.
The imagery and personification suits the subject and draws the reader in to the tale portrayed.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi Gypsy,
Written with eloquence, style and perfection.
Beautifully presented as always.
The imagery and personification suits the subject and draws the reader in to the tale portrayed.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Shirley. I appreciate your exceptional six-star review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
With all the passion going on in this poem, I'm pretty sure it's more than a crush. At least on her side. LOL Again, your God given talents shines through brightly. Thank you.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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With all the passion going on in this poem, I'm pretty sure it's more than a crush. At least on her side. LOL Again, your God given talents shines through brightly. Thank you.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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LoL
Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
There's a lot of passion in this poem even though it's just a "crush" and we don't know if there is any mutual love in those "burning eyes". But one can imagine it!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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There's a lot of passion in this poem even though it's just a "crush" and we don't know if there is any mutual love in those "burning eyes". But one can imagine it!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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At the beginning of every love relation is exciting but eventually changes to a deeper and mellow love.
Thank you, Big Sister.
love 😘
Comment from RJ Heritage
Seems very passionate, which I know crushes tend to be. I like the strong colors used to convey that feeling of strong emotion.
Thanks for sharing
RJ
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Seems very passionate, which I know crushes tend to be. I like the strong colors used to convey that feeling of strong emotion.
Thanks for sharing
RJ
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
love the orange and yellow colours and cool pics - they go great with your imagistic words flowing smoothly. . . . .
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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love the orange and yellow colours and cool pics - they go great with your imagistic words flowing smoothly. . . . .
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Kahlani
This is a beautiful poem, so eloquently written with echoes of romance. It flows nicely and the openly line grabs your attention. Thank you for sharing and I wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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This is a beautiful poem, so eloquently written with echoes of romance. It flows nicely and the openly line grabs your attention. Thank you for sharing and I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Your beautifully presented gogyohka is full of heat and passion. I like the way your verse builds towards those final 2 alliterative lines and leaves the reader with a stirring and memorable image of "blazing eyes." Well done, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Your beautifully presented gogyohka is full of heat and passion. I like the way your verse builds towards those final 2 alliterative lines and leaves the reader with a stirring and memorable image of "blazing eyes." Well done, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
This gogyohka, You Know I Have a Crush on You, has the proper formatting and describes the intensity of the relationship existing here within the dance.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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This gogyohka, You Know I Have a Crush on You, has the proper formatting and describes the intensity of the relationship existing here within the dance.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊