Autumn Falls
free verse15 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent free verse with a nice flow and composition. I like the imagery and presentation too. Great nature imagery. Good luck
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Excellent free verse with a nice flow and composition. I like the imagery and presentation too. Great nature imagery. Good luck
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Gypsy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Ha! Absolutely love the 'concluding lines' here! :-) summer bows and autumn falls.... aah, the performance that are the seasons! :) Quite the original offering here, Sir Bill, good job -- good luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Ha! Absolutely love the 'concluding lines' here! :-) summer bows and autumn falls.... aah, the performance that are the seasons! :) Quite the original offering here, Sir Bill, good job -- good luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Yvette.
Comment from gansach
This is a nice entry for the Free Verse Poem competition. Nice use of fall colors for the background and print, great descriptions of the arrival of autumn in all its seasonal glory. Well done!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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This is a nice entry for the Free Verse Poem competition. Nice use of fall colors for the background and print, great descriptions of the arrival of autumn in all its seasonal glory. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Grace
Comment from nomi338
And the unlucky gather rakes and bags to gather the fallen leaves for disposal. If you are a designated gatherer, it is wise to get in shape during the Summer months so that you will not tire out during the season of raking and gathering.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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And the unlucky gather rakes and bags to gather the fallen leaves for disposal. If you are a designated gatherer, it is wise to get in shape during the Summer months so that you will not tire out during the season of raking and gathering.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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I grab a cocoa and watch the unlucky work.
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Lazy bum,(She said).
Comment from royowen
Most of our trees are evergreens, unless we have trees from another hemisphere, and they turn a the normal season of autumn down here, rebelling against their northern region Bill, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Most of our trees are evergreens, unless we have trees from another hemisphere, and they turn a the normal season of autumn down here, rebelling against their northern region Bill, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Roy
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Welcome Bill
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
The second half is hard to read. I love autumn. It is my favorite season. October is my favorite month.. The air is crisp. Perfect weather where I am, East Texas. Sweater time. Karen :-)
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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The second half is hard to read. I love autumn. It is my favorite season. October is my favorite month.. The air is crisp. Perfect weather where I am, East Texas. Sweater time. Karen :-)
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Well, autumn fell, Karen.
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It fell on clorox.
Comment from Gloria ....
Some good word play here, and fine free verse just letting us know it is that time again, and what a splendid curtain call it is.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Some good word play here, and fine free verse just letting us know it is that time again, and what a splendid curtain call it is.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Gloria
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is wonderful, and I like the symbolism of the dual-colored font. It's such a great time of year, and you captured its high points beautifully here. Best of luck to you in the Free Verse Poetry contest! xoxo
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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This is wonderful, and I like the symbolism of the dual-colored font. It's such a great time of year, and you captured its high points beautifully here. Best of luck to you in the Free Verse Poetry contest! xoxo
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Rachelle
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Bill,
I watch this almost every day while walking my trail in Grand Bay. There are so many leaves on the ground right now. It's a sure sign that winter is right around the corner. But I'm glad we experience each season here in New Brunswick.
My favorite line,
"autumn falls upon the world." ... I especially like those two synonyms together, "autumn falls".
Good Luck in the contest, Bill!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Hi Bill,
I watch this almost every day while walking my trail in Grand Bay. There are so many leaves on the ground right now. It's a sure sign that winter is right around the corner. But I'm glad we experience each season here in New Brunswick.
My favorite line,
"autumn falls upon the world." ... I especially like those two synonyms together, "autumn falls".
Good Luck in the contest, Bill!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Kimbob
Comment from Wendy G
Well, it does at least fall on your part of the world. We are enjoying spring when everything is announcing new arrivals. A fine free verse poem -well done, and good wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Well, it does at least fall on your part of the world. We are enjoying spring when everything is announcing new arrivals. A fine free verse poem -well done, and good wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Wendy
