Sauce For The Goose
What comes around2 total reviews
Comment from Nicki Nance
First, I really appreciated the candid self-talk from the betrayer's point of view. The twist at the end so close to his expiration was clever. What an inconvenient time to die. Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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First, I really appreciated the candid self-talk from the betrayer's point of view. The twist at the end so close to his expiration was clever. What an inconvenient time to die. Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Nicki.
Comment from RodG
The title of your poem could not be more appropriate.
Good job of telling us about the husband's philandering ways and how/why he chose to honor his vows.
The climax of your story was not unexpected, but you build the suspense well.
Rod
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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The title of your poem could not be more appropriate.
Good job of telling us about the husband's philandering ways and how/why he chose to honor his vows.
The climax of your story was not unexpected, but you build the suspense well.
Rod
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Rod.