2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
That final line is wonderful there, my lady!! Such an unusual way to state that 'settling moon' over the water... another beautiful haiku, Gypsy! ;) Thanx so much for sharing! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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That final line is wonderful there, my lady!! Such an unusual way to state that 'settling moon' over the water... another beautiful haiku, Gypsy! ;) Thanx so much for sharing! :) Yvette
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Katiemae1977
I really like this Gypsy.
"Ocean full of moon" is a spectacular satori. I like the personification of the sea swelling with longing. Very nice!
So much to love about this one.
Luv&stuff
Katherine
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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I really like this Gypsy.
"Ocean full of moon" is a spectacular satori. I like the personification of the sea swelling with longing. Very nice!
So much to love about this one.
Luv&stuff
Katherine
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Katherine
Gypsy 😊MariVal
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your God given talent is shining almost as bright as that full moon over the ocean. You bless us every time you share a poem and a presentation with us. Thank you.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Your God given talent is shining almost as bright as that full moon over the ocean. You bless us every time you share a poem and a presentation with us. Thank you.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very beautiful and to me, very inspirational work. It speaks to me of both celestial beings, yes I often consider the ocean as being poetically celestial, and the moon so united in their joy of life, that become swollen and full respectively.
RJ
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Very beautiful and to me, very inspirational work. It speaks to me of both celestial beings, yes I often consider the ocean as being poetically celestial, and the moon so united in their joy of life, that become swollen and full respectively.
RJ
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
The ocean is really full of moonlight in that gorgeous purple picture! Great use of alliteration and consonance and personification of the sea swelling with longing.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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The ocean is really full of moonlight in that gorgeous purple picture! Great use of alliteration and consonance and personification of the sea swelling with longing.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
❤️ Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
love the image of an ocean full of moon
sounds serene and relaxing
a great haiku
love all the purple
good word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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love the image of an ocean full of moon
sounds serene and relaxing
a great haiku
love all the purple
good word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley 😊
Gypsy hugs