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My Family Comes First

I was a happy child.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Senyai
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Hi Raul,

I have been away from FanStory for some time, almost 2 years now. I just wanted to see how you have progressed in your writing and I feel you have come a long way in perfecting your thoughts and getting them on paper so to speak. This is a lovely expose' on family and what it means to you. Stay writing, my friend.

All the best,
Senyai

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from Ang Tang
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This piece captures a warm, nostalgic childhood filled with family love, creativity, and faith. It's sweet and simple, with memorable scenes of Christmases, zoo visits, and the joy of shared moments. Heartfelt and wholesome!

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You poem is warm and your memories joyful about your family and your magical childhood. l enjoyed your story for the contest, you have some fond remembrances here, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
    Thank you!