My Autumn Afternoon
Rhyming31 total reviews
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This beautiful poem expresses autumn wonderfully-the sights, the comfort, the scents, even the emotions. I think I'd like to nestle with my poetry beside you there!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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This beautiful poem expresses autumn wonderfully-the sights, the comfort, the scents, even the emotions. I think I'd like to nestle with my poetry beside you there!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hello there! Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks Verna!
Melissa
Comment from Begin Again
With all the chaos erupted around us and politicians pounding us with their form of lies and deceit, I too choose to slip into your poem and remain secluded but in peace. WEll done!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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With all the chaos erupted around us and politicians pounding us with their form of lies and deceit, I too choose to slip into your poem and remain secluded but in peace. WEll done!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi Carol. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from write hand blue
Well rhymed with a smooth flow. The Fall mood for the poem is started by a perfect picture in soft Autumn gold and appropriate glow.
A pleasing poem with a description we can all relate to and just the right length. Mel
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Well rhymed with a smooth flow. The Fall mood for the poem is started by a perfect picture in soft Autumn gold and appropriate glow.
A pleasing poem with a description we can all relate to and just the right length. Mel
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi there. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a beautiful scene you describe Melissa. I was imagining hot chocolate with the book and then the mulled scents of Fall had me thinking of mulled wine. A great little place to read and relax.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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This is a beautiful scene you describe Melissa. I was imagining hot chocolate with the book and then the mulled scents of Fall had me thinking of mulled wine. A great little place to read and relax.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi Valda. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
There are so many elements to enjoy in this beautifully fluent and rhyming verse: the coziness of being warm and comfortable, the scents of food and spices, a welcome space to call one's own while the colours and chill of autumn gather outside. I love the imagery of the clocks cantering into chime too. Why would you want anything more? Thanks for sharing, Melissa. Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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There are so many elements to enjoy in this beautifully fluent and rhyming verse: the coziness of being warm and comfortable, the scents of food and spices, a welcome space to call one's own while the colours and chill of autumn gather outside. I love the imagery of the clocks cantering into chime too. Why would you want anything more? Thanks for sharing, Melissa. Debbie
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi Debbie. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Melissa.
This is a comforting poem about relaxation. You detail the events of the day with good descriptive terms. It is excellent rhyme and you kept the meter steady throughout.
Well Done.
Robert
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi Melissa.
This is a comforting poem about relaxation. You detail the events of the day with good descriptive terms. It is excellent rhyme and you kept the meter steady throughout.
Well Done.
Robert
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi Robert. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again!
Melissa
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You're welcome
Comment from jake cosmos aller
liked the reflective poem about the beauty and sprit of the fall season. I can feel the fall weather as I read your lines Loved these lines
I sink into my cozy chair
while autumn nips the crispy air.
A book, a cuppa something warm,
I think I'll claim this ~ my new norm!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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liked the reflective poem about the beauty and sprit of the fall season. I can feel the fall weather as I read your lines Loved these lines
I sink into my cozy chair
while autumn nips the crispy air.
A book, a cuppa something warm,
I think I'll claim this ~ my new norm!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi Jake. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Rhyming at its best! I thoroughly enjoyed this and it brings back days in Connecticut when the leaves turned red, the fireplace was lit, and the scent of spices filled the air!
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Rhyming at its best! I thoroughly enjoyed this and it brings back days in Connecticut when the leaves turned red, the fireplace was lit, and the scent of spices filled the air!
xo
Pam
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi Pam. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again! Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from Neonewman
I think this reads like a sonnet--however, only eight syllables per. What an interesting and brilliant piece in this style. I love this time of the year, it seems to bring me comfort.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I think this reads like a sonnet--however, only eight syllables per. What an interesting and brilliant piece in this style. I love this time of the year, it seems to bring me comfort.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi there. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again!
Melissa
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My pleasure, Melissa.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. The poem was interesting and descriptive. The rhyming is very good. Love the picture. Autumn nips crispy air, what a good description.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I enjoyed reading your poem. The poem was interesting and descriptive. The rhyming is very good. Love the picture. Autumn nips crispy air, what a good description.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi Brenda. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again!
Melissa
