Little things
A six-word poem50 total reviews
Comment from godlucifer
life bring eternity. eternity of small moments. in life we cherish those small moments. your poem was creatively creative. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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life bring eternity. eternity of small moments. in life we cherish those small moments. your poem was creatively creative. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Many thanks for your kind words.
Comment from jenintorre
What an awesome poem in only six words, Sue true and profound.Your chosen artwork really complements it.
I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes . Jen
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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What an awesome poem in only six words, Sue true and profound.Your chosen artwork really complements it.
I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes . Jen
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Many thanks for your kind words, Jen, and for the sixth star. Most generous. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading this six-word poetry contest entry. It seems life is full of more short and small occasions than large and expensive, flashy ones. So this also sounds like a meek and mild truth as well. Nice share, and good luck in that contest!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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I liked reading this six-word poetry contest entry. It seems life is full of more short and small occasions than large and expensive, flashy ones. So this also sounds like a meek and mild truth as well. Nice share, and good luck in that contest!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Many thanks for your kind words, Cookie. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Neonewman
Well said, Tony.
Wow! This is an extraordinary short piece you have delivered. Relatable to all. Best of luck in the votes, my friend. This one should rise to the top of the heap.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Well said, Tony.
Wow! This is an extraordinary short piece you have delivered. Relatable to all. Best of luck in the votes, my friend. This one should rise to the top of the heap.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Many thanks for your kind words, Steve. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony
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My pleasure, Tony.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I like your use of a colon in this - I don't see that often in poetry. It's simple and to the point, Tony. Just like the best moments of life.
Good luck to you in the contest.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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I like your use of a colon in this - I don't see that often in poetry. It's simple and to the point, Tony. Just like the best moments of life.
Good luck to you in the contest.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Many thanks for your kind words, Pam. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from jaded831
Your poem makes one appreciate the simple pleasures of life. Life is not good all the time, but it is those little moments that make life worth living. The picture added that extra touch. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Your poem makes one appreciate the simple pleasures of life. Life is not good all the time, but it is those little moments that make life worth living. The picture added that extra touch. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much for this most affirming review, Carolyn, and for the sixth star. Greatly appreciated. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Pearl Edwards
It certainly is, and as the older we get the more those little moments become extra special, when children grow up, when people are no longer with us. You've used your six words well Tony. Good luck in the contest.
valda
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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It certainly is, and as the older we get the more those little moments become extra special, when children grow up, when people are no longer with us. You've used your six words well Tony. Good luck in the contest.
valda
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thanks very much, Valda. I appreciate your kind comments. I was pipped at the post in the contest by Katiemae. I have to admit that hers was the better poem!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Perfect! I don't think a six-word poem could get any better than this -- life is indeed a collection of small moments even to the point of being what we remember as we age: the good ones.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Perfect! I don't think a six-word poem could get any better than this -- life is indeed a collection of small moments even to the point of being what we remember as we age: the good ones.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Dawn. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Amelie Johns
This is a lovely six word poem. It is often the little things that matter the most. I think we all got to appreciate the simple little things during COVID. The small moments are often the ones I treasure the most. Particularly those that I share with my children. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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This is a lovely six word poem. It is often the little things that matter the most. I think we all got to appreciate the simple little things during COVID. The small moments are often the ones I treasure the most. Particularly those that I share with my children. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Amelie. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice poem about the joy of little things. there is a Korean expression Sohang which means little things and finding joy in the little things that make up life
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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nice poem about the joy of little things. there is a Korean expression Sohang which means little things and finding joy in the little things that make up life
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Jake, and for introducing me to the Korean expression. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.