The Heartbeat and the Blood
A Six Word Poem2 total reviews
Comment from talented150
I love how much thought you gave to this 6-word poem. It is very spiritual, and I appreciate the reverence you had for the Sacrament. I draw from your poem, that maybe you feel you have life because of the blood the Savior shed for you. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
I love how much thought you gave to this 6-word poem. It is very spiritual, and I appreciate the reverence you had for the Sacrament. I draw from your poem, that maybe you feel you have life because of the blood the Savior shed for you. Keep writing.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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In the space of a very few words, you have just given my testimony. Thank you for that. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
This is a beautiful poem in only six words. I read your notes and was fascinated to learn of your experience. It, and your tiny poem will stay with you I'm sure. A very meaningful and excellent write. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
This is a beautiful poem in only six words. I read your notes and was fascinated to learn of your experience. It, and your tiny poem will stay with you I'm sure. A very meaningful and excellent write. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much. I was hesitant to post this poem because I wasn't sure anyone would understand what I was trying to say. I figured it would take a special person to get it, and you are that person. You get it and I'm thankful. I appreciate your kind review and especially the sixth star.
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Bless you. The 'other side' is always sending messages and communications. We just have to be open to it. I'm so happy you were given this gift to carry with you x
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Amen. Blessings to you as well.