His Silence
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Comment from BethShelby
Callun couldn't resist saying I told you so. There is got to be a way to leave before it gets to the point they can't. I wouldn't be drinking any more of that wine or letting anyone hypnotize me. This would be scary to be in this situation.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Callun couldn't resist saying I told you so. There is got to be a way to leave before it gets to the point they can't. I wouldn't be drinking any more of that wine or letting anyone hypnotize me. This would be scary to be in this situation.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Beth. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh dear, it sounds like someone's got to Callum too and Danielle?Grace is becoming isolated/classic grooming. Now left alone with Oliver, she's very vulnerable. I like the contrast between her, the lone figure and everyone else on the bus like robots. This is scary stuff, Jacob, and you're delivering with style. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
I see you're all off to (the) shops.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Oh dear, it sounds like someone's got to Callum too and Danielle?Grace is becoming isolated/classic grooming. Now left alone with Oliver, she's very vulnerable. I like the contrast between her, the lone figure and everyone else on the bus like robots. This is scary stuff, Jacob, and you're delivering with style. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
I see you're all off to (the) shops.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Debbie and for spotting that missing word. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
Hmmm...odd behavior for Callum. Wonder if someone is getting to him or he's fed up with what Danielle has gotten them into. Strange that they all are leaving unless Oliver has more tricks up his sleeve. Good job, Jacob!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Hmmm...odd behavior for Callum. Wonder if someone is getting to him or he's fed up with what Danielle has gotten them into. Strange that they all are leaving unless Oliver has more tricks up his sleeve. Good job, Jacob!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Callum certainly seems to be on edge. He wasn't fond of the idea of returning in the first place, but he always wanted to protect her. You are doing a good job of amping up the possibility of danger. Mary also seems to be a scary person.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Callum certainly seems to be on edge. He wasn't fond of the idea of returning in the first place, but he always wanted to protect her. You are doing a good job of amping up the possibility of danger. Mary also seems to be a scary person.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Carol. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh my gosh, what's going on with Callum?? Surely he isn't being turned against Danielle? That's scary. Maybe he can talk to the quiet guy and find out what's happening that he tried to warn Danielle about. Or, maybe he's infatuated with Eve now.
Okay, I guess I've got another day to wait.
You are a great and prolific writer, my friend.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Oh my gosh, what's going on with Callum?? Surely he isn't being turned against Danielle? That's scary. Maybe he can talk to the quiet guy and find out what's happening that he tried to warn Danielle about. Or, maybe he's infatuated with Eve now.
Okay, I guess I've got another day to wait.
You are a great and prolific writer, my friend.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Rhonda, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from royowen
That sounds a bit ominous that Callum, Danielle's best friend doesn't wave back when they were all waving back, something definitely seems rotten in Denmark doesn't it, iypt would be nice if there a summary of the story on the motes, Jacob, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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That sounds a bit ominous that Callum, Danielle's best friend doesn't wave back when they were all waving back, something definitely seems rotten in Denmark doesn't it, iypt would be nice if there a summary of the story on the motes, Jacob, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Roy, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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Most welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
What is going on with Callum? I would love to know. I am really worried about Danielle. She's in way over her head. I do hope things work out. I can't wait to read more.
Callum's sitting next to the bloke I (sitting beside the bloke)
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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What is going on with Callum? I would love to know. I am really worried about Danielle. She's in way over her head. I do hope things work out. I can't wait to read more.
Callum's sitting next to the bloke I (sitting beside the bloke)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.